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Equestria Girls Alternate Ending by Darkonix Equestria Girls Alternate Ending by Darkonix
I don't know about 'yall, but that redemption thing at the end of Equestria Girls was just horrible. If it were up to me it would have been something like this. Now I'm not much of a comic artist, but I hope I conveyed the idea well enough.

EDIT: I am frequently getting the comment: The chains are too dark. Or This would be better without the chains. Or I don't think the chains are appropriate. Now, I'm not really a good person to say what is or is not appropriate, but are you guys seriously being irked by chains? CHAINS? It's a commonly used restraining device. You know those links between hand cuffs? CHAINS. I'm not about to judge any of you, but I just don't understand how this would be considered inappropriate.

The second panel is set up to be DARK and MOODY to lead up to the emotional aspect of the following panels. I'm glad some of you are getting that dark feeling but I can't help but find it silly to be off put by chains. How would you have me restrain her? Word of mouth? Regular jail bars? This isn't a question of morality, but one of restraining a potent magic user. A former student of Celestia.

Also it isn't explicitly stated but she is only in there for a few hours before they come in. You guys are letting your imagination over react

Again I'm just a little confused.
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:iconbluethunder25:
bluethunder25 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015
I don't hate this ending, but I'm not too fond of it. Sunset just up and apologizing to her former mentor just doesn't cut it for me. Sunset seems like the kind of Vegeta-esque villain to me.
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:iconteamtrgc:
TeamTRGC Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
"Least Favorite Student "
XD
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:icon19111995:
19111995 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
And she learns the meaning of death.
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:iconrainbowcat9981:
rainbowcat9981 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I like this ending much better.
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:icondaydreamingdragon220:
DayDreamingDragon220 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Oh that's so sweet!!Clap I am a dummy! 
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:iconpinkadiapia:
pinkadiapia Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
Why is she at dungeon what happened to love and tolarete
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:iconrdash13:
RDash13 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ive been dying for a fanfic where twilight chooses to stay at CHS And graduate with flash and getmarried and have children.... blah blah blah.
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:iconsupersexyghotmew95:
supersexyghotmew95 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
actually me to
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:iconrdash13:
RDash13 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww really? also i think Hasbro should make the third movie of E.Q. Girls, since its the last one Actual humans.
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:iconsupersexyghotmew95:
supersexyghotmew95 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
Yeah that would be sweet
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:iconrdash13:
RDash13 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
IKR
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:iconjohannchristopherg9:
johannchristopherg9 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Student Artist
Sometimes I would think that the chain has the words "demon proof" printed on the cuff.
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:iconpepper124:
Pepper124 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I would love if it ended like this.
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:iconjenny-artz:
Jenny-Artz Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:iconprincesscelestiaplz: ahh sunset shimmer my LEAST faithful student
OMFG LOL XDD
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:icontjbladex:
TJBladeX Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
THIS IS HOW IT SHOULD HAVE ENDED!!!
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:iconaldodger:
aldodger Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
Every cutie mark is missing except in panels 2 and 9
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:icondarthlink22:
DarthLink22 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
I'm looking at this again... did Sunset deage in the last two panels? She seems shorter and is missing her cutie mark. Was that the intention? That Celestia made her a filly to try and raise her right this time?
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Nightshade054 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love your ending better than what Hasbro had! I wish you worked for Hasbro on show and movie endings
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:iconfluffysam1212:
fluffysam1212 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this really should have been the end of the movie. It is WAY better than what they actually did.
In other words, it is good. :D
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:iconfluffysam1212:
fluffysam1212 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*this
Why did I put it?
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:iconchaoticfluttershy:
ChaoticFluttershy Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
the movie should've ended with this honestly..
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:iconmaximumflyer64:
MaximumFlyer64 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
Man, I've seen many alternate versions of "the redemption of sunset shimmer" thing, and they're all better than what actually happened!
nice work!
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:iconprincessponypaint:
princessponypaint Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
that would be a cooler ending, i could just think about future episodes with sunset shimmer! ;P
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:iconrdash13:
RDash13 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Dude i know right. i also Know that hadbro said as one of the spoilers for season 5 that There was going to be a 7TH ELEMENT OF HARMONY. everypony thinks that is Derpy. Personally, I think it's Sunset Shimmer.
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PrincessCrystalSnow Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
I love the comic... Good job
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:iconbellekitten:
Bellekitten Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this comic is crap and you are a faler
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:iconpnfforever11:
PnFForever11 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
shut up troll. this comic has feels and you are heartless.
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:iconbellekitten:
Bellekitten Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ahehh screw you
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:iconpnfforever11:
PnFForever11 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
*fires anti-troll cannon. and then I run.
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:iconbellekitten:
Bellekitten Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*runs at you with a 100000000 troll faces* take this!
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:iconpnfforever11:
PnFForever11 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
I won't want to turn this to a comment war. I better end this before it gets out of hands.

*transports all troll faces to the moon for eternity.
*send Bellekitten to the time-space distortion for eternity
*close all barriers and prevent him/her from breaking physics so that she won't escape.
*ready orbital friendship in case if he/she escape.
*booby trap him/her prison with 10000 Justin Bieber/One Direction songs
*booby trap him/her prison with 1000 fairies and 100000000000000000000000000000000000 supernatural boxers and infinite Kaijus.
*bobby trap him/her prison with her most hated things and biggest fears.
*lock her prison with giant Locks and Chains.
*booby trap the exit route with 10, 000 C4s.
*Place impenetrable shield around Earth and this dimension.
*Load anti-virus.exe


There. This will prevent Comment War, although, just in case if she replies, anyone please take over, I don't want to be involved in a comment war.
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:iconbellekitten:
Bellekitten Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You talk too much! Crash WINNER! Stupid Okay... Moving on now... A good spanking... Herr Llama Emperor Problem? 
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spogo Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sunset Shimmer is missing her cutie mark in the last panel. Also, Rainbow and Flutters are missing their cutie marks in the 5th panel.
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Hedgemouse Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
I like the chains, actually. I think they're symbolic of the mindset Sunset Shimmer has put herself in - in the canon ending, she says she didn't know there was another way to exist. In this alternate ending you've made we really get to see that mentality, that inability to understand forgiveness and friendship. The chains are like a metaphor for how her own cynicism has cut her off from being with others on an emotional level.
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PonyGal202 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
least faithful student..... really?
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DrawingPrincess28 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I agree, that redemption scene was kinda lame and for me it felt kinda rushed..
And yes you did very well!! This would have been a better ending.

I like how Celestia looks so powerful in the 6th panel yet in the last two panels she's so kind, gentle, motherly and loving. ^u^
Looks like something you'd see in the show! :)

(Though I think you forgot Sunset's cutiemark in d last panel)
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:iconvioladreamcatcher:
ViolaDreamCatcher Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013
In the last panel, Celestia looks so motherly and kind. I love her. 
:iconprincesscelestiaplz:
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:iconbluecube84:
BlueCube84 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this ending better
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:iconchicho234:
chicho234 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
If this ending was in the movie, it will be 20% cooler. Yep I was expecting an ending like this. 
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BenRG Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
I'm pretty sure that, after the Elements cleansed Sunset, she (like Luna before her) expected nothing but death for her treachery and for succumbing to her dark impulses. It's just that Twilight doesn't do things that way.
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:iconfantasygerard2000:
Fantasygerard2000 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Artist
This also could have Happen
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:iconburritothefox:
burritothefox Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this should have happened
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:iconshadamyfanatic61:
Shadamyfanatic61 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013
i can't believe that they are so forgiving...but then again, the show is based around love and tolerance...so yeah...carry on...
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:iconlkz665:
lkz665 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that looks really pretty! i wanna draw like that!

also, that would've been a really cool ending!
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:iconcaptain-brony:
Captain-Brony Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:XD: I like it
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:icondestinydecade:
DestinyDecade Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I wouldn't mind having this ending. I always say that there is hope for her and I still believe it.
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:iconbiobasher:
Biobasher Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
my least faithful student :icontrollestia:
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:iconroyaleanimequeen:
RoyaleAnimeQueen Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013   Digital Artist
Exactly. Trollestia strikes again!
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:iconwamix-awesomeness:
WAMIX-awesomeness Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
What? It's true! Sunset Shimmer abandoned her!
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